Friday, February 24, 2006

All Night Long Searching For An Important Paper Comments

Rating: 5.0

I could not find
so turned the apartment upside down.
Such a vital item!
if found, I was sure, all my troubles would be gone
...
Read full text

Charles Chaim Wax
COMMENTS
kskdnj sajn 02 March 2006

As a person who often scrambles around looking for that piece of paper...I appreciated reading a moment in life's ability to offer those valuable... but simple distractions. Great poem. :)

0 0 Reply
Hugh Cobb 24 February 2006

High concepts good and evil all based on points of view sometimes arbitrary presented with humor & compassion yet in the great scheme are such concepts relevant? A fine and tender poem.

0 0 Reply
Chuck Audette 24 February 2006

This took a different direction from the title and opening, almost comedic, lines. It was interestingly true-to-life, but I still wonder.. what the piece of paper was.. -chuck

0 0 Reply
***** ********* 24 February 2006

Thanks Charles I enjoyed this tale of yours very much. Thank the lord! I never nose sweat! lol Tai

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success