Thursday, May 29, 2008

All Night Long… Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fragrant footsteps of your heartbeats
paced to-and-fro on my heart’s red carpet,
while the phantom of your reminiscences haunted me
all night long!
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Bharat Trivedi
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wow it's one of your best work... very well written with nice flow and great images.. thanks

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Vaibhav Pandey 13 December 2008

great usage of words. I loved it.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 September 2008

A nice poem with wonderful imagery, love it.10 for it.

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Chitra - 18 August 2008

an intense melancholy write, fine phrases!

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Well written this poem has a very nice flow. best regards, joan d.h.

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, aryaindia 17 July 2008

The fragrant thoughts rise with the current of your uprising feel in this very beautiful poem that you have written splendidly. Thanks. Arya

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