All My Pen Ever Says Comments

A thought provoking rendition insightfully crafted with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Ben.

Death And I Rode Motorbikes Together For Decades the grim reaper smiled put his hand on my shoulder but I did not feel colder because death and I ride motorbikes looking back at death I smiled death and I ride my motorbike together for decades rode motorbikes together death and I loving lapping up the ride Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'All My Pen Ever Says' by the poet Ben Paynter. Dedicated to the poet Ben Paynter.

Changing seasons with the muse of the night. Nice work.

'and before he leaves he always says see ya someday but I never much care because' loved it, I never much cared either, because death and I rode motorbikes together for decades, loving lapping up the ride :)

Clever ending.. Solid work

whoa Ben! ! ...mighty pen you wield..everyone wants to write poems like this one..ahh but you got to them first..their rightfully yours...beyond good :) tom

This one has always been one of my favorite pieces of yours

love your style in this poem. :)

Lovely literary piece. Excellent indeed! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

'There’s been many a night In the darkness of Alone' Your opening line reminds me of ee cummings resounding line ' as small as the world and as big as alone' Your pen has created an evocative picture Mr Paynter! Justine

Well written and only a painter can do such an attractive painting.

What a fine, genuine write! You are a poet worthy of the name. Kindest regards, Sandra

Got the chills reading this one. Great write, and an even better title ~Amber~

What your pen has said here is... a splendid piece...... well done!