Thursday, September 28, 2006

All My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I awoke this morning
to find you
sleeping in my arms
if only in my dreams
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Raymond J Wright
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Francesca Johnson 27 November 2006

I can only repeat what other readers have said about this poem. It's beautiful, Ray. It shows a delicious longing for someone you haven't got... Love, Fran xx

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Mark Earls 15 November 2006

This is one I can definitely appreciate- love is an oddly (im) patient thing!

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Gavin Cassens 14 November 2006

very nice. I can relate

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R, this is simply dreamy. It is where we all want to be. You take us there. In a piece that flows and is memorable. The mark of a fine poet, methinks. t x

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Daniel Roxburgh 07 October 2006

Very nice sentiments here. Your words speak of such a deep longing for the one you love. Honest and direct - I enjoyed it.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 07 October 2006

It's the simple honesty here that is profound. An excellent poem with depth and beauty. H

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Patricia Gale 30 September 2006

Beautiful, simply beautiful....

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