I awoke this morning
to find you
sleeping in my arms
if only in my dreams
...
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This is one I can definitely appreciate- love is an oddly (im) patient thing!
R, this is simply dreamy. It is where we all want to be. You take us there. In a piece that flows and is memorable. The mark of a fine poet, methinks. t x
Very nice sentiments here. Your words speak of such a deep longing for the one you love. Honest and direct - I enjoyed it.
It's the simple honesty here that is profound. An excellent poem with depth and beauty. H
I can only repeat what other readers have said about this poem. It's beautiful, Ray. It shows a delicious longing for someone you haven't got... Love, Fran xx