All My Life… Comments

Typo in first line gets you off to a shaky start: 'too' should be 'to. After that slight bump, the poems pulls itself together. You have used the standard image of a rising sun and given us a fresh look at it. Tom

'for a few moment' ya know I used to think that this world was a piece of crap but I found friends that showed me that sunrise, and I sang along with the birds and dance with dawn! ! Try to make those moments last! ! wonderfull poem I really like it, and I think that this world it is worth to fight for, people just don't see it! ! : ( keep up the great job! ! !

this is really positive and nice one ^^ it's kool ya seem to be happy with life