Friday, August 3, 2007

All My Certainty Comments

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I stare at who you are fading away
Caught a glimpse as it follows the breeze
I satisfy myself with a gentle tear
And close my eyes as it fails to cease
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John Lorenzo Javier
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Malgorzata Mika 03 August 2007

Your poem is full of hiden meaning, a little bit enigmatic...like a hidden memory covered with a mist of time, kept inside one's memory...true, real but on the other hand elusive and distant :)

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