Tuesday, October 21, 2008

All Metaphor Comments

Rating: 2.7

The problem is metaphoric;
I live inside lines
which only approximate
but do not satisfy.
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Lonnie Hicks
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grego 29 January 2018

trash it is TTTRRRRRAAAAAAASSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Joanne Togati 15 December 2008

we all need this kind of honesty in our lives. I ask myself today how am I like this? Thanks for the read Lonnie

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C. P. Sharma 04 November 2008

A subtle satire at the civilized society. Something like my poem 'I am civilized'. But you are more personal in your expression. The two can be corroborated. God bless you.

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Kesav Easwaran 27 October 2008

seems you love your words, seen from the way you write...good artful piece, Lonnie...10

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Lonnie Hicks

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