Sunday, June 25, 2006

All Men's Dream - Fifa World Cup Comments

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fifa world cup - this month
where eyes will grovel
all over Brazilian fields
twisting and turning
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john tiong chunghoo
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Alfredo Jacques 20 February 2007

I just need to say thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem.

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JOHN...DARTING PIECE OF VERSE...STELLAR USE OF IMAGERY, WHICH YOU ALSO EXHIBIT ASTUTELY ON YOUR HAIKU...THOUGH IM A BIG FOOTBALL FAN, I AGREE THAT THE SENSATIONALISM OF PRO-SPORTS IN GENERAL HAS & CONTINUES TO SEND ABHORENT MESSAGES OUT TO OUR CHILDREN...AS FAR AS WAR...I HEAR YOU LOUD & LOUDER.....WE LIVE...WE DIE...AND IN BETWEEN, IF WE COULD JUST IMPLEMENT SOME CLARION COMMON SENSE...WHO KNOWS, RIGHT? ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Kelly Neville 25 June 2006

'war is a dirty word' indeed... it seems these onfield battles are very popular here so i understood this poem greatly...kelly

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