Monday, April 6, 2015

All Joys With Your Name Comments

Rating: 4.3

The overcasted weather of my heart tells me everyday
there is a shower of blessing awaiting my presence

The twinkling birds of hopes whisper in my ears
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 September 2015

there is a shower of blessing awaiting my presence rivers and luscious waters expecting my enterance stars looking forward to be spent in my paths dreams who are eager to be embraced by me there is someone who longs for you and lives for you! i selected these lines from your poem and happy that i did. your eagerness and love and desire and expectation is all there in these verses of your poem. a very good poem thank you. tony

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Saadat Tahir 30 April 2015

An ardent and effusive poem, well balanced between the tri-chotomous feelings of hope desire and spirituality. A montage of sorts like the slowly drifting clouds. The thoughts and aspirations are mingled with belief… if graphic and pictorial One steps in and out of here and the hereafter. Allegorical and imaginative, a hint here a step there... liked

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Kelly Kurt 06 April 2015

A Lovely poem, Asma Thanks for sharing Peace

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 April 2015

A superb poem written beautifully! The imagery is great to read here. Its great to meet your poems here. Kudos and applause. Pls do review my latest poem too titled mother natures. .....

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