Tuesday, February 20, 2024

All Is Peace But Feral Comments

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In the ages of dark in which will cripple us,
None can cheer us other than Saint Nicholas.
When our society is connected by a mere isthmus,
The only thing bringing us all together is Christmas
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Vincent Miranda
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Rod M.Peters 16 March 2024

I think isthmus is a geographical term, like a somewhat narrow stretch of land connecting two larger masses. Society could be more appropiately said to be connected by a 'thread' instead, though at the present time it would appear more likely to be 'hanging by a thread'.

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Bri Edwards 15 March 2024

I won't believe that 'Saint Nicholas' brings the world 'together' when one estimate of the percentage of the world's population which is 'Christian' is only 31%.

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Bri Edwards 15 March 2024

(cont.) 'Isthmus' works just as a rhyme, I think. I DID appreciate the other rhymes! : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 15 March 2024

'Feral'? ? ? ? FERAL: in a wild state; resembling a wild animal. That's a 'reach' for me to fathom, as is 'isthmus'. (cont.)

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