Monday, July 6, 2009

All Is Over....... Comments

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the lights go out.....
the city black......
all is silent.......
not a soul......
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Angelic Warrior
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Ejaz Khan 20 July 2009

All rythmic, concise and meaningful, keep it up!

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Ronald Doku 16 July 2009

wow. that was unique. first time i ever read something like this here. that was genius. i liked it alot

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wael karameh 11 July 2009

Frankly speaking I like it because it is short, deep and you put in a nice shape(taht of the triangle): human being is a traiangle of thoughts, feelings and behaviors... keep the nice write... wael

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will i see a bright sunny afternoon those who leave tell me to be happy... yes u will and life is full of hope so carry on with it... read mine hopes against hope, nver say die and good bye

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Keith Hendrickson 07 July 2009

lol.... very very good... style is very good and you show you got plenty of it.

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