Saturday, July 11, 2020

All Is Not Lost Comments

Rating: 4.6

Sometimes silent sorrows
seep into our souls.
Sadness saturates our days
and casts deep shadows
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Cowboy Ron Williams
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Susan Williams 06 January 2021

Top marks for boldly telling the truth. And I loved the alliteration of first stanza and it worked! ! !

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Suresh Kumar Ek 18 October 2020

Return to god The gist of the poem

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Savita Tyagi 13 October 2020

Beautiful poem on hope and spirituality. Thank you Ron williams and thank you for visiting my page. Your Bio is an inspiration in itself.

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Chinedu Dike 29 August 2020

A profound spiritual rendition with an inspirational fragrance. Remain blessed, Cowboy Ron.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 16 August 2020

Thank you, everyone, for your comments!

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Intergalactic Observer 06 August 2020

Brian Johnston, you poor, misinformed earthling! " Sorrows seep" and: sadness saturates" are NOT metaphors at all! They are examples of ALLITERATION!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 July 2020

A wonderfully penned composition. Simply uplifting....10++

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Brian Johnston 15 July 2020

You may become famous Ron! " Sorrows seep" and: sadness saturates" are both metaphors! Keep it up!

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Brian Johnston 15 July 2020

Preaching to the choir old friend though some might say your verse leaves them blank? Is it possible to " return" to Christ when He is always there and Grace is His Gift to all sinners? Isn't even a " dyed in the wool" atheist who somehow has Christ in His heart as much a Christian as you or I? That's my humble opinion anyhow. Hint to a new poet among us: " Sadness seeps, sorrow saturates" are metaphors! Ha!

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2020

Repentance! ! Overcoming the odds! Lies from Satan! ! ! ! ! Deceiving the whole world. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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