Monday, July 23, 2012

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Rating: 4.6

What has gone wrong with the world today?
Fighting, killing, This is not okay
Death for money, religion and greed
Pleasure from seeing people bleed
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Lyn Paul
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Bri Edwards 16 December 2016

well, Lyn, it's a fine poem, with fine sentiment, but from what little history i've read/been told of..........the world has been troubled since 'time immemorial'. : (: ( bri :) ..........a smile for a better future? to MyPoemList

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2016

Greed! Like a reed blown away! ! With the wickedness of mankind on earth today. Thanks for sharing.

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Amitava Sur 15 February 2014

A nice message, until these devils are off, this earth won't have peace.. let's hope for best. You may read my poem Killing myself.

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Kanav Justa 22 November 2013

.. a beautiful message for all us... liked it

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Heather Wilson 13 December 2012

Such a heartfelt poem for peace, a well written hope for the future I`m sure many echo.

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Red O'mara 06 November 2012

Lovely thought well put, Lyn. Too bad the world's not run by lady poets.

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Valerie Dohren 23 July 2012

Short and succinct, very relevant let's hope it will all end soon, very soon! ! Great write.

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