Friday, August 17, 2012

All In Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.5

When the room was dark
From somewhere the sun shined bright

When the tap was dry
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Jinal Oswal
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 November 2012

A lovely poem dat goes beyond d pensive touch to interest any reader. Very nice.

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Pratibha Awasthi 11 September 2012

beautiful lines: Let the rain come down And wash my tears Feel my soul And drown my fears

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 August 2012

Wow! ..sister great poem here...I like the lines..... When there was weakness I earned strenght... That's how it really should happen, when you go through hardships you learn something and learn to be brave, trials shape us to be better persons in the future...thanks for sharing such great poem. Siya_! !

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