the sun, the sun
the sun will rise
just like always
i'll wake, i'll wake
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Oh Faith, do you suffer from a stammer! I was feeling quite sorry for you in case this was so. I found it a little disjointed with this repeat process but have read some of your other work and it's a little different this one. What I read of some of the others is nice. Sincerely Ernestine Northover
I did like the hope skip and a jump feel to this and It reminds me of a happy school yard rhyme Very simplistic in design and very beautiful Love Duncan X