Wednesday, October 19, 2005

All I Want Is A Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do they run and scream in fear
Even when I do shed a tear
I never do them any harm
There really is no need for alarm
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Steffi Webster
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 December 2015

True friends are all that we need in life. Nice work.

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David Harris 06 March 2007

Steffi, ah, as Samantha said this harks of Casper the friendly ghost. Brilliant write. I really loved this one. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Samantha lynn 19 October 2005

lol casper the friendly ghost hehe jk i relle thought that was cute check mine out sometime and tell me what ya think

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John Kay 19 October 2005

Steffi....stuff like this is hard to live with and it's hard to write about. You're willing to write about it so, I would suggest that you be more specific by creating a location first, the put the people in one-by-one. Forget the need to rhyme and don't worry about shading the truth in order to make it poem that works....John Kay

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Cara Green 19 October 2005

good poem, i like it alot

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