Thursday, November 29, 2007

All I Want For Christmas (A Bit Naughty) Comments

Rating: 5.0

All I want for Christmas is to treat you as my wonderland
My finger tips to skate lightly across your chest
Hearing the music of a softly fine tuned band
I need you to be my holiday quest
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Patricia Gale
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Ted M 26 August 2009

A question. Did you get your present? Smart write, Interesting, witty, entertaining..............10

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This is so appropriate with Christmas looming. It is naughty and it is nice. It is also a very different one about Christmas. This is the first time I have looked at your work as I am a new poet to this site, but I can see I will have a beautiful time reading your poems. Regards Karin Anderson

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James B. Earley 18 April 2008

Naughty but nice! Excellent.

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Original Unknown Girl 15 February 2008

Patricia, I don't know why but I've not seen any postings of yours in a while. Thought I would come back for a look-see. I was not disappointed! This is wonderful and even if it is the slightest bit naughty it's done in impeccable taste. Classy tribute to your heart's desire. Love it, Christmas or otherwise! Helen aka HG now UG! ! : -) xx

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Nimal Dunuhinga 13 December 2007

Your beautiful dream may comes true Patricia............Christmas comes only once in a year?

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Bob Blackwell 07 December 2007

Hope yor wish comes true, sure would be the best kind of Christmas present. Patricia your a star, keep writing poems like this. Yes you are a hopeless romantic, but so am I. Love Bob.

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Elizabeth James 01 December 2007

If Santa comes to your house I can only bet he'll skip the cookies and milk and look for some lovin with you. Great write. Thanks for sharing Beth

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Meggie Gultiano 30 November 2007

you're naughty indeed, huh..

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Thad Wilk 29 November 2007

Patricia! Are you sure Santa knows thats all you want for Christmas? *10*! ! Thad

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