I want someone who understand me
Like me for me who already wonderful as who I am
I can laugh, joke with, and talk like we known each other for years with this guy
You are like icing on my cake that I want
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you need to read poems of famous writers in order to recognise their strong structure and there are rules to write a poetry. imean you have to include figures of speech or musical instruments your grammer is week and you need to work on it: D: D BUT this is better than the other poems. hope this advice be useful and i hope that you could be a famous poet: D
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