All I Want Comments

Great poem, it reminds me of Rumi and his love poems. Both, spiritually with the one and only true source of love and emotionally charged to seek the one looking for love!

Beautiful! Thanks for sharing. <3

On the wings of your dove I want to fly. On your shoulder I want to spill tears and cry... endearment bestirs to latch on to green of wild heart to mellow embracing gloss of blue, beautiful write being passionate,10+, thanks for sharing

very beautiful poem, from a deep and true heart!

Good work! And enjoy mine. Fly with Me Fly with me. Why do you just kiss in the dark street? Oh, fly with me. There is more to know though the lips are sweet. Fly with me. Say good-bye to the bees lost in flowers and trees. Oh, fly with me Over the mountains, across the seas. Fly with me Into wherever our minds can see. Oh, fly with me Beyond what our present being seems to be. by Gordon Tseng

With one as passionate as you surely a dove will come flying back at you with a message of love so true

A great poem about love. A really good write.

.Wow! :) :) :) Lady Jaqcui i just created an image with some of the ideas of expression you disposed, i realy am amused, ......the poem very cozy.

Oh my god! I'm writing something.. wanna say you something... reached... Yes I think he gives you his shoulder - you can cry, you can lay I don't why! Yikes! I think dove carried your message - He has put his hands around you, stay there! Yes! I think he gifted you his mind. I think you are making inroads in his mind forever! Yup! You I think - he is seeing angel in you walking in his garden.... I think he will teach you about love - all the love in the heaven and earth.... Dove is fluttering and i think he is singing a SOLO song but suddenly it turned into a love song..... My name is Harry; I’m falling for you – I’m your Valentine; My love is named Larry; I’m getting flowers for you – my love fountain! Marigold, daisies, rose flowers are too few to amaze my love............. Poet take my smiles and give me life! Ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) :) :) Miss you Jacqui... Miss you...

O MY GOD! ! ! I am loving this truly.... May God bless you with your wishes.. Keep writing :)

'on your shoulder i want to spill tears and cry' well written poem, , , with the most beautiful words...keep them coming sister! ! !

Your words are so beautifully written - a really heart felt poem. Every line is perfect. Truly Wonderful!

You swept the sky with freedom of peaceful mind...The poem, simple with stunning arrangement..it has beautiful words, well what i can say i like this poem very much keep your talent out and paste it on paper! :) _Unwritten Soul