Sunday, December 27, 2009

All I Want Comments

Rating: 4.5

your hands bushes over mine
your eyes capture my soul
your stories entertain my mind
your smile takes my heart
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Brittney Miller
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G. Murdock 30 December 2009

There's a typo in the first line which distracts from the simplistic exposition of your poem. Otherwise good.

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Adens Kamwi 30 December 2009

short but ever so sweet lovely

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C. P. Sharma 27 December 2009

Sublime divine love. CP

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