Sunday, August 12, 2012

All I Truly Desire Comments

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Days are troubled
Wearied from endless toil
Dreams disappear and crumble 
Thoughts ravage my mind 
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Dom Hunt
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Bri Edwards 18 November 2012

dom, are the walls literal or figurative walls. i hope, if this is a true-to-you tale, that you have gotten/get the love you were/are seeking. i don't care much for love poems, but i see from your bio that you are drawn to them. thanks for sharing. bri edwards

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Tracey Witt 13 August 2012

A sadness that reads like a song.....time does indeed play tricks....

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Valerie Dohren 12 August 2012

We all seek the refuge to be found in true love - a lovely write

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