I want to be your fragrant musk,
I want to be that soft breeze that gently touches your soul,
I want to be that fire, which enflames your heart,
I want to bathe in the ocean of your passions,
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Well written. It's obviously an extension of your soul. A BEAUTIFUL attention To the POWER OF LOVE.
A spendid and sweet song that is loaded with love and pregnant with passion!
Such a love is either for God or someone who is a virtual image of God. A nice description of climax of emotions for a true beloved...............10
Very very nice to read, you are gone besotted hook line and sinker, ALL I SEE IS YOU and why not love is in the air written in your very own style+++10 kind regards
wow so passionate.. :) great poem, Anjali, obviously deserves to be among the best. Yelena M.
tenderly written and beautifully knitted with well crafted words........
'My heart is trapped by your love, And when the shades of twilight close the day, All I see is you! ! ! -you! ! ! -you! ! ! .' Sinking in the ocean of love, excellent poem. And duly appraised.10+++
And when the shades of twilight close the day, parts of me are inside of you are sleeping inside quietly eternally
The intoxication of our night together Has not left me The sensuousness in our passion, my mind, your body, my body, your mind, still entwined in my arms I opened my eyes but that did not disturb me dream, nay Yes, i recall Our reciprocations Yes, i do Our exchange of sweet nothings The dreams which your lips gifted me stays with each breath i take Even in your absence The thought of you excites me When i turn over in my sleep My dream just takes another hue When the thought of you enters my mind those moments bubble, under a sheet of water My body, my mind, my dreams, my heart is on fire resplendent with you Yes, i recall Yes, i do The seasons that bind you to me are countless They contain promise of several lifetimes My sorrows so real for me My sorrows so trivial to you I wish for a long night and longer day I wish for a life with you endless enough to contain our togetherness in our pains, in your hiccups and those problems occasional Yes, i recall, Yes, i do The dreams of your lips gifted me stays with each breath i take......every breath is your name i take every cry i make is for you every bit of happiness is for you everything i have is for you...
Ooooooooooooooooh................. Absolutely delicious. Truly Keats or Shelley or Shakespearian. Romantic to the nth degree. Old Brit flavor in lingo, persian in womanly romance and grecian in beauty.
love is joy with all its worries and happies. wonderful written!
O' to be the you for which you write such beautifully about! Someone is quite fortuneate indeed.
I can feel your love for this guy.Its so reaaalllllllll and original.Hope he'll love you too, like you do.Great love poem. Dean Nordy, US of A.
All I see is you In a wintry morning dew In a cat's mew In cow's mow In a sea's blue Nay in life every's hue What I see is you you you. Good work 10A+++++++++++++
lovely poetry nice use of words totally awewsome