Monday, December 15, 2008

All I Really Want.... Comments

Rating: 4.3

So....
this is my mind -
a light I cannot switch off
illuminating with clarity
...
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Viola Grey
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Bullion Grey 02 April 2009

My hope is that whoever you were writing about or to, they are still with you. A brazen quality to this scribble that is the essense of an aware spirit.

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Existential Despair 27 February 2009

This feels like it was my heart speaking to me in all its truthfulness...v.g your skill behind the pen is unprecedented (ps this fights with cupid for 1st place)

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Laurie Hill 22 January 2009

Really enjoyed this.....a good write

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Kris Smith 27 December 2008

Top write my upside down friend you are brill 10 +++ Chris

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Kesav Easwaran 24 December 2008

an innocent child like loving heart yearning for a love cradle...good piece, Viola...pleasingly expressive...10

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Saint Cynosure 17 December 2008

So... I know I do not read like I should, I am hardly ever on here I have not posted anything in weeks. Well... I see that you are the one picking up my slack with wonderful works as this one... 10+++++

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Chitra - 17 December 2008

very appealing, i could realate to each and every word. 10+

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totally disturbed 16 December 2008

I really like this you express your feelings very well.. take care Wendy

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Tai Chi Italy 15 December 2008

Great work Viola! I think you describe what really each and every one of us wants, so equally, hope you get what you want and keep it forever in your arms, smiling at you, TAi

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