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This poem gave me chills. Of empathy, not dread. It captures the pathos of the regretful loss of a love object perfectly. And it captures the character of the poetess in that there is no malice in the face of rejection; just painful regret and total honesty of the healing process. I gave this poem a 9. let me know if you wish an assessment as to why. In private.

A great start with a nice poem Emily, Thank you very much,

California air is healing me and I can clearly see my edges are smoothing over once again I particularly like the analogy you used. Your edges are smoothing over once again. it speaks of times when your emotions had been hardened only to later find they had been tempered. keep writing.

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Emily.

Good

Well written, I can almost hear a song :)