Saturday, October 13, 2007

{all I Love About You} Comments

Rating: 3.3

The sound of your laughter
The light in your eyes
The strength of your arms around me
How it feels as if you never want to release me
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Lillian Jamison
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~ Jon London ~ 12 May 2008

Beautifully composed piece, your heart speaks of experience...lovely heart warming poem with a graceful glow in every flowing line. Excellent! ! ! 10/10 from Mr London. best wishes

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Thad Wilk 01 April 2008

Eloquent and radiant beautifully depicted start to finish! ! ! *10*! ! Best regards always! Friend Thad

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Sylvi Sylva 08 January 2008

Lillian, What can I say - you have it all here! keep it up, topten I say x

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Poison 9901 13 October 2007

Very nicely done Lillian Love is what we spend 90% of our lives searching for. And when you find it, you know it by the feelings you've penned here in this poem. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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