The sound of your laughter
The light in your eyes
The strength of your arms around me
How it feels as if you never want to release me
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Eloquent and radiant beautifully depicted start to finish! ! ! *10*! ! Best regards always! Friend Thad
Lillian, What can I say - you have it all here! keep it up, topten I say x
Very nicely done Lillian Love is what we spend 90% of our lives searching for. And when you find it, you know it by the feelings you've penned here in this poem. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison
Beautifully composed piece, your heart speaks of experience...lovely heart warming poem with a graceful glow in every flowing line. Excellent! ! ! 10/10 from Mr London. best wishes