If this is a game of hide and seek,
I’m over here.
If this is a fairground ride,
I want to get off.
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I'm impressed. Your use of example of situations that bother you really help to bring this poem to life. Good job! ~Linley~
Awesome write, Dan! We all feel this way from time to time... but you have found all the perfect words. You have explained it so well.
dear life this ones heavy, but true. i know a few people who feel like this. how do you find the right words to express feelings? i can never do it right.xxx
there is a bold truth in it... no scratch that.... this is truth i love it hmm what were you thinking when you wrote it
Very well done. I like the harsh truth to it. This is just how some people view life and to have the courage to write about such freyed emotions is not in everyone.
Great expression of such raw emotions Dan. Very intense.......your frustration is definitely showing throug in this one. Nice job. Sincerely, Mary
This one is absolutely great, you expressed the vileness of life with such strength and directness. Amazingly you expressed how I feel better than I do. Take care, Mary xxx