Thursday, January 12, 2006

All I Know Is I Hate It Comments

Rating: 5.0

If this is a game of hide and seek,
I’m over here.
If this is a fairground ride,
I want to get off.
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Dan Brown
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Mary Ali 16 May 2007

This one is absolutely great, you expressed the vileness of life with such strength and directness. Amazingly you expressed how I feel better than I do. Take care, Mary xxx

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Lin B 01 February 2007

I'm impressed. Your use of example of situations that bother you really help to bring this poem to life. Good job! ~Linley~

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Lesa K 21 July 2006

Awesome write, Dan! We all feel this way from time to time... but you have found all the perfect words. You have explained it so well.

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Tamsin Burnett 21 February 2006

dear life this ones heavy, but true. i know a few people who feel like this. how do you find the right words to express feelings? i can never do it right.xxx

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Missy Trinity Ferrari. 08 February 2006

there is a bold truth in it... no scratch that.... this is truth i love it hmm what were you thinking when you wrote it

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Joy Vanderhelm 13 January 2006

Very well done. I like the harsh truth to it. This is just how some people view life and to have the courage to write about such freyed emotions is not in everyone.

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Mary Nagy 12 January 2006

Great expression of such raw emotions Dan. Very intense.......your frustration is definitely showing throug in this one. Nice job. Sincerely, Mary

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