Friday, August 29, 2008

All I Have To Give Comments

Rating: 0.0

You're the first thing I think of
Each morning when I rise.
You're the last thing I think of
Each night when I close my eyes.
...
Read full text

melissa chabot
COMMENTS
Olivia Misery 29 August 2008

This so nice and I can totally tell that your spirit is in your poetry. gjadhnjoadi; I'm sorry, that's the best way I could possible explain it. :) -livia

0 0 Reply
Pied Piper Berry 29 August 2008

This is cute and well penned. I enjoyed it.

0 0 Reply
Stephanie Fiddy 29 August 2008

awwww i really really reallly like it! ! ! but i think you should make it a lil longer ;)

0 0 Reply
melissa chabot

melissa chabot

Concord. Mass.
Close
Error Success