Monday, May 19, 2008

All I Have Comments

Rating: 4.4

You are an arrow
piercing my heart
with glowing joy,
rivalled only
...
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Viola Grey
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Shirley Woods 31 July 2009

Hi Viola, I thought this was beautiful and expresses how unsure we are in love and how vulnerable. Thanks

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*Trusting You* 27 December 2008

that is all you need to give my friend. just you nothing more nothing less. good job. Becca

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Tom Balch 04 September 2008

Green eyes sharp teeth this is such a lovely piece regards Tom

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Brandon Dugan 31 July 2008

yet another great piece of work i loved it :)

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 July 2008

A good presentation of the gift of love. GW62

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Fred Babbin 11 July 2008

Such a lovely, simple message.

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Kyle Shield Laster 09 July 2008

lovely...very. 10! !

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Hela Jug 01 July 2008

very good poem, very passionate...

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James B. Earley 01 July 2008

Introspection.....passionately expressed!

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 01 June 2008

A poem from the depth of heart...........for someone whom you love good reading

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Mark Nwagwu 29 May 2008

Love is faith, to dream, to hope. And this poem speaks to all three - faith, hope, love dreams - and that's everything that the human heart longs for, and needs. Great! ! ! !

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 28 May 2008

heartfelt poem, thanks for sharing

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Who Iam 26 May 2008

To what i am, The simplistics of this write paints a beautiful picture.Your writings are similiar to someone i know.Amazingly close in feeling as well. Keep, up your fine work it appears to be a labor of love. Dreams are sometimes all we have to hold on to From Who I am.

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Emancipation Planz 20 May 2008

an eruditic - piercing piece... I look forward to more... a late welcome to PH... aroha

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Stone Granite 20 May 2008

'all I have to give to you is what I am.' That Viola is a great deal indeed. Beautifully done and very romantic. Who would not want to be called a 'dream.' How wonderful to be called that. Great poem.

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