You are an arrow
piercing my heart
with glowing joy,
rivalled only
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that is all you need to give my friend. just you nothing more nothing less. good job. Becca
Green eyes sharp teeth this is such a lovely piece regards Tom
A poem from the depth of heart...........for someone whom you love good reading
Love is faith, to dream, to hope. And this poem speaks to all three - faith, hope, love dreams - and that's everything that the human heart longs for, and needs. Great! ! ! !
To what i am, The simplistics of this write paints a beautiful picture.Your writings are similiar to someone i know.Amazingly close in feeling as well. Keep, up your fine work it appears to be a labor of love. Dreams are sometimes all we have to hold on to From Who I am.
an eruditic - piercing piece... I look forward to more... a late welcome to PH... aroha
'all I have to give to you is what I am.' That Viola is a great deal indeed. Beautifully done and very romantic. Who would not want to be called a 'dream.' How wonderful to be called that. Great poem.
Hi Viola, I thought this was beautiful and expresses how unsure we are in love and how vulnerable. Thanks