Sunday, October 4, 2009

All I Had To Lose Comments

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You were my first cup of tea after work
You were the shower, washed the sweat and dirt
You were my well-thumbed naughty magazine
You were the newspaper in the morning
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Jack Williams
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Ruth Walters 01 November 2009

We all fear the loss of the person we love the most, it's human nature and you describe this feeling so well here. Ruthie

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Patti Masterman 09 October 2009

Wow, got so caught up in the feel-goodness, that the last line kind of snatched the earth out from under me for a few seconds. It is for this reason, one can never truly possess or be possessed, I think..lovely sad lines, thank you.

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Sans Serif 05 October 2009

I like the flow of this. Kinda musical.

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