Monday, March 31, 2008

All I’d Leave Behind Comments

Rating: 4.5

As I walk the streets I know so well
And up the steps of a church I rightfully call mine
I see the friendly face of someone who knows too much
Yet does not say it and is not imposing
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Yaritza Florencio
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Stephanie Stamm 10 April 2008

This is incredible writing. Keep on writing. This is incredible poetry!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 March 2008

nice potrayal of one self's feelings...........

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Daniel Wheeler 31 March 2008

pretty good. is it true? i gave it an 8, true or not it was good.

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Yaritza Florencio

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