Monday, January 30, 2006

All I Can Do Is Cry Comments

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All I can do is cry,
Just Fall over and die.
The tears never have sessed to flow,
And now my face as not glow.
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Nyki Thomas
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Shane Markie 16 October 2006

Pain is a 4-letter word, Nyki, but so is love. Don't cry, but just remember that there are people who have suffered far more greatly than you. Jesus was the One who suffered most for you. ~Shane~

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Rajaram Ramachandran 18 June 2006

Sometime tears lighten the heart, but not always. In place of tears if one shows cheers, it will be possitive step towards the right path. Tears weaken one's mind. It is a kind of self condemnation. Cowards die many a death while a brave man dies once- This is the proverb to say that never think of death always which reduces our positive actions. Lord gives us one day extension in our lives every morning when we wake up to carry out the mission for which He created us. The poem of this young girl has really touched my heart.

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 05 February 2006

sad but profound poem...this expresses feelings that i am sure many people can relate to like i can...keep writing! ! ! i liked this one a lot! all my best-faith

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Nyki Thomas

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