Friday, April 10, 2009

All I Ask From You Comments

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All I Ask From You

You know, I've been thinking lately
Maybe I've done something wrong
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Julia Pascual
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Ency Bearis 22 April 2009

a very nice narrative poem..well expressed..keep up the good work...

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Akram Awadat 22 April 2009

it is toutching poem, beautiful lines i like it

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

a beautiful write my friend.. brilliantly done

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Eyan Desir 13 April 2009

Hey this is a good write but its poetry your words need to flow more

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Julia Pascual

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