All Hope Comments

Nice poem, great flow easy to read and great in subject

hope bit never the last

A very beautiful poem💗

This is a great poem Bill, there is lyric, there is poetry, there is philosophy and education! - Raj Nandy New Delhi

Well constructed. You Brits have the advantage over us. You use classic metaphors the way you breathe. We don't have any of that.

top-notch structure and form, Bill, but more impressive is the great flow, elevated subject and classic references. wonderful work. -Tailor B.

All hope -yes we need that, at least I do...to me 'Forgetting yesterday All hope is stored in thoughts' means saving and storing good moments to keep you strong Your poem is positive without beeing too much too soon I love it -Pia

I liked the second stanza most, though I wonder: isn't there a contradiction between 'forgetting yesterday' and 'stored in thoughts'?