Saturday, January 28, 2006

All Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

All hope lies in tomorrow
Betrayed by yesterday
For every new horizon
There is a price to pay
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Keith Brown 01 May 2020

Nice poem, great flow easy to read and great in subject

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narci 10 June 2019

hope bit never the last

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Nimil 13 September 2018

A very beautiful poem💗

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Raj Nandy 04 November 2008

This is a great poem Bill, there is lyric, there is poetry, there is philosophy and education! - Raj Nandy New Delhi

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Fred Babbin 11 January 2008

Well constructed. You Brits have the advantage over us. You use classic metaphors the way you breathe. We don't have any of that.

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Tailor Bell 22 November 2006

top-notch structure and form, Bill, but more impressive is the great flow, elevated subject and classic references. wonderful work. -Tailor B.

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Pia Andersson 17 September 2006

All hope -yes we need that, at least I do...to me 'Forgetting yesterday All hope is stored in thoughts' means saving and storing good moments to keep you strong Your poem is positive without beeing too much too soon I love it -Pia

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Julia Klimenova 28 January 2006

I liked the second stanza most, though I wonder: isn't there a contradiction between 'forgetting yesterday' and 'stored in thoughts'?

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