Sunday, January 6, 2008

All His Dream Remain To Gruard Comments

Rating: 3.7

There was something in his eyes
Just the way he cannot hide,
Vivid sparks that caught the light,
Just amused about the whys.
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Mary Wismer
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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 January 2008

Yet there is some thing in the poem that one can not hide the depth of his glaze yet he sparks with light as with delight...................superb writing, i like it, and offer 10+, thanks for sharing

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Sim Dan 10 January 2008

Exceptionally brilliant, dear Mary - feel like seeing a bit of me in the mirror of your words - captures the intensity so beautifully well! Thanks a great deal!

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CU2urDream Lost 07 January 2008

very beautiful fine write, metaphor.

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Meggie Gultiano 06 January 2008

beautiful flow of words my sweetie pie..love it Mahal kita, Meggie

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Melvin Banggollay 06 January 2008

Very nice poem. Best wishes at kmusta na ang kalagayan mo. Sana lagi kang masaya at safe. love lots, melvin

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