Saturday, October 7, 2006

All Hallow's Eve...................... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Brisk, this cold October wind,
pruning husks of brown-balled leaves
into effigies of Autumn's wane,
sweeps with besom broom
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John Tansey
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 November 2006

Solid crafting here, John...Stellar use if imagery...Nice tight, crisp structure...Smoothfluxion, providing a nice free-flowing read...A fine Penning''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F j R

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Sidi Mahtrow 07 October 2006

'Even fire hides from the cold in the skin of the gourd on All Hallow's Eve, ' That's great imagery! s

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