All Day I Hear The Noise Of Waters Comments

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I hear it, or the rain, even FX, is better than none. We are water made mysterious curiously experience into existence.

All day I hear the noise of waters Making moan, Sad as the sea-bird is when, going Forth alone, He hears the winds cry to the water's....... Beautiful

Amazing flow of words. Outstanding poetry.

very nice. i like it. thanks for sharing.

beautiful, excellent. thanks for sharing

All day I hear the noise of voters Making moan, Sad as the sea-bird is when going Forth abroad, He hears the winds cry to the voters .

Lucid but powerful expression!

Beautiful poem. nice to read it.

.........wonderful poem...reads nicely ★

Beautiful poem. Enjoyed the contents and rhthm

Interesting rhyme scheme. I may give it a go. I doubt it's surreal. He lived in Ireland.

Fantastic hallucination appearing from the soul indeed. Actually philosophy guides us sometimes to live on subconscious, perhaps. Flowing Water is the symbol of ceaseless life-force. The man or any artist who can touch this soil by his meditation.... this can happen to a personality, perhaps.....I feel it's a su-real writing. Good post...................................Pranab k c

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making moan lol awkwardness