Monday, November 5, 2018

All Day All Alone Comments

Rating: 4.8

More than a slice of cake
And a glass of champagne
What I dreamt of, was a loving heart
Oh how I dreamt all day all alone
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Susheela Alexiose
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Dr Antony Theodore 09 November 2018

When our heart and body united in profound love It bought forth cute angels in our life Who sat around our table like olive plants Oh how I dreamt all day all alone...very fine poem. more and more you are becoming very very poetic........ thank u dear poetess. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2018

This is a beautiful poem on dream, love and life having touching expression with nice collocation. I cite... I dreamt of a caring heart Who will cuddle me to sleep Who will make me forget All my sorrows and pain Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 November 2018

'When our heart and body united in profound love It bought forth cute angels in our life Who sat around our table like olive plants'..is beautiful imagery indeed. Wish you are blessed with such a life as you have imagined. Nice poem.

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