Friday, May 15, 2009

All Cries In Vain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Far too much
She suffered
Far too often
He touched
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Martine Kolber
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 March 2010

emotion and thoughts are poetically written in this poem... nice!

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Siddharth Singh 23 July 2009

A miserable cry brought to life with this piece. Lovely poem.

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Tonight I eventually Understand What she Tried to show Me so many Times In vain she tried so many times but u failed to cath her feeling... lovely piece...10 read mine mary to marry, anywhere, , butterflies around and si may go

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~ Jon London ~ 15 June 2009

Martin there's so much emotion poured into this emotional piece of your wonderful heart...to rid ourselves of the demons that plague us with the heart ripping past...we must first face them...It takes time...but when we realise how much stronger we are....nothing can get in our way...only a love that we contain in our hearts...acceptance is the key..to set us free.....wonderful tones to this piece Martine...gives it the real affect.....and that's Soul

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 May 2009

Some past experiences and remorses follow the whole life like an evil spirit. A soulful write, Martine. Keep sharing, it will console you. Best Wishes Naseer

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isabelle Cote 28 May 2009

exellent........i have nothing else to say thats was true exellence

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C. P. Sharma 28 May 2009

Short, simple and suggestive of the agony of man's tyranny. CP

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 May 2009

Splendid Love it

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 May 2009

most passionate write grilled by deep sorrow, yet of unique genre, well penned,10++, thanks for sharing

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premji premji 17 May 2009

martine, well penned...... words paint unknown pictures in my soul............

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