Wednesday, June 4, 2014

All By Itself, Nothing Begins; Nothing Ends Comments

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Ending of one thing is
The beginning of the other
Meet and Merge, with each other
Equitably, in the inter-phase
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Roseann Shawiak 07 July 2014

Very good, for every action there is a reaction, i.e. reciprocating ways. When one thing fades another is coming. You have very artistically written of the cycles of most everything in life in this one poem. Excellent poem. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Gajanan Mishra 06 June 2014

reciprocating way, very good writing, thanks sir.

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Colleen Courtney 05 June 2014

Ah! Such truth you have found and beautifully written to share with those who know not! Wonderfully done!

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Akhtar Jawad 04 June 2014

A beautiful description of cycle observed in all the affairs of life.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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