All But Love Comments

'Friend he called me, called me many names But he never heard, heard my cry of pain Words he gave and words had no meaning Will he acknowledge my being, was a distant dream Shattered I lie and lie with my shattered heart Nostalgia of days, the days those are gone past' especially loved these lines leading to the inevitable 'he did not give LOVE! ! ! '

Love, the only thing missing and the most important thing of all. Well written and congrats on poem of the day!

Sorry love story nicely told, Among the things he gave, gave passions of desires The only thing he did not give, he did not give LOVE! ! !

Left he scars, many scars of emotional turmoil Took away my peace, the peace for a lifetime A fine portrayal of emotions arising out of a consequence of a love betrayed. Thanks.

Stone heart can have only love of stone but not vibrant heart of love ever sure!

The plight of a betrayed mind has been wonderfully narrated. Instead of brooding over it, it is always better to get moving forward with a positive approach to mold the future with motley colors. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

So much string attached but in the end it always be dettached, as we encounter and feel the pain there is always a bright side, that we learn from it. All the pain will always remain on our heart but it will also teach us how to be strong & be a better person. I really love this poem! ! ! ! God bless you always!

from one joanna to another i adore this poem i feel the pain and emotion that this person does well written xxx

Heartful story of love..........lamentig plangent, beautiful, i do appreciate

Beautiful poem and I say, 'Move on to someone who will love and adore you.' Easier said than done, because I have a hard time moving on. : -))