Wednesday, December 30, 2009
All Bottled Up Comments
Rating: ★4.8
eyes staring blankly at the screen
ears open to the conversation beyond her world
hand slowly squeezing,
as the harsh words flow to her.
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Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive)
31 December 2009
Again, this is so sad. I understand why though. This seems to be a common theme in your poems. But, you know it so well, and express it beautifully, so, I'd keep workin with it.
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7/28/2025 4:47:07 AM # 1.0.0
i really love this poem, its quite sad and moving! i love your expressions and how you use the words