Friday, October 17, 2014

All Born Naked Comments

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Hey...
It's A small world
Unite!
What for...
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Lyn Paul
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C. P. Sharma 02 November 2015

But what an irony, civilization gave ma guns and bombs to kill while we are born to live. I enjoyed reading this, dear Lyn.

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Valsa George 11 November 2014

We have come to the world naked and empty handed. We will return from here also empty handed! But while on Earth, we wield weapons in hand to annihilate our own fellow men! Everyone has a right to live and enjoy this world which is wonderful! Killing others and denying them the right to live is brutal! A very inspirational write!

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Babatunde Aremu 30 October 2014

A highly inspirational poem. Ther is the for all hands to be on deck to make the world peaceful, well done, poet

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Valerie Dohren 25 October 2014

I will never understand killing either Lyn, but it seems that it is all 'the powers that be' know. Man's inhumanity to man continues. Well said.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 October 2014

A peace motivating poem beautifuly writen in a super cool way. I wish all satanists who r undertaking secret killings could follow its mesage. Everybody has rights to life unles he killd sombody. Nobody shud kill innocents. Warmest regards.

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Hazel Durham 19 October 2014

As always an inspiring write, to live is to love, to hate is for our souls to die, we are all born naked we need love and protection! Powerful with a great message!

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 October 2014

Beautiful poem Lyn with fantastic lines.... Understand our reasons, for not understanding YOURS Everyone must give to LIFE For living is such a good cause. Great message...All Born As One. Positive flow of words, of Peace and Love. Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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