All Because Of You Comments

I have just read the first poem you posted here, and loved it. A new style I would say, because I guess you've written the poem from your lover's point of view. I did not understand it though, till I came to the fifth stanza. And The last stanza is superb!

Good point of view and great write! ! !

Good point of view and great write! ! !

..great write...beautifully written..

I like this write! ! A beautiful poem! !

Thank you Adeline! I am honored to get such a good comment from a poetry professor!

Ah! If so, you were writing in the opposite gender, you did a great job of it. There are no trailers to give you away. Good job. Adeline

Thank you for reading it! Alexis I wrote it through the eyes of someone I've hurt and i wanted to say that I know how he feels. I found it easier to use this poin of view.

This poem has great flow. The content isnt bad either. I'm a little confused as to why you wrote it in the point of view of a male when you're a female though.