Wednesday, May 11, 2016

All At Sea Comments

Rating: 3.1

Compulsively concerned,
Claudia considered constipative confections.
Cheddar cheese, course.
Chewers choose cashews,
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Tom Billsborough
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Marilyn Lott 21 May 2016

I too give you and A for your Cs! Clever indeed!

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Tom Billsborough 23 June 2016

A for a C Fair exchange. Wouldn't like to attempt As. Could end up with a C! Tom

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Elisabeth Wingle 17 May 2016

Wow Tom, this is very clever and I imagine quite hard to do.so, have you created a new form of poetry? I know that I have never seen this before..I give you an A + on your 'C's

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Tom Billsborough 17 May 2016

I think Kelly hopes not! I've done the Cs and the Ps. Pam wrote one on Ws which I think might be beyond me! A would be impossible. B might become very rude. Cs you have Ceen. Ds delightful? Damnably difficult...... Yes it's the New Poetry. I did get a B- once in Biology. My diagrams were appalling! but I digress. Thanks for the A+ Maybe if I did another it might wake Kelly up! Try one yourself. How about X? Only joking

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Tom Billsborough 21 May 2016

Thanks Elizabrbeth and CU again! Tom

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Pamela Sinicrope 16 May 2016

Fun! I wrote a poem like this about angels using the letter W, but then changed it. Maybe I should have kept it. You did this well. I enjoy the challenge of constraints myself. Well done.

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Tom Billsborough 16 May 2016

C C AS WE SAY IT ITALIAN. IF YOU CAN REMEMBER IT, PUT IT IN. I THINK Ws would be a really tough challenge. A sapphic is even more fun. Advise you to hide all your best China before attempting one. Or you'll end up having a smashing time! Thanks for comment, Pam

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Kelly Kurt 11 May 2016

I love me some alliteration. Not an easy task for an entire poem but you pulled it off delightfully.

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Tom Billsborough 11 May 2016

I was going to regress to B's but I though it might lead to a lot of swearing. Mind you we could always put an advert in for Wes's Bud. Could be even more artistic. Many regards Tom

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Sumit Ganguly 11 May 2016

Very bold experimental poem. I don't remember having read such alphabetical approach in my life. Thank you. By the way, your comment on ' A Bed-Time Call' inspire me, thanks.

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Tom Billsborough 11 May 2016

I liked your poem a lot, Sumit. Thanks for the comment.

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