Friday, October 17, 2008

All At Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

His lips are an ocean
lapping her breast

Her fingertips explore the swell
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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

pushes to make way and rides the rising tide to safe haven. Rachel Ann Butler

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Tj Becker 16 November 2008

This was a fluid smooth flowing poem. Delightful in the wording, you gave us enough to let the imagination fly, I like where mine went haha Great write

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Viola Grey 18 October 2008

sensual without being obvious....nicely done

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