Thursday, April 3, 2008

All At Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clouds they drift in aimless sky
Upon this life of mine
The sun is shaded by hidden doubt
No matter how I try
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Tom Balch 11 August 2008

What a really wonderful piece, a great read,10/10 regards Tom

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Mick Law 05 April 2008

Sue - we all have days like that. Hope it is a passing mood. excellent read, do me a favour write me a poem of joy, we both need it Mick x

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Malini Kadir 05 April 2008

Today of all days I too feel at sea...and one with you..thank you for sharing your write with the world..........

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sue crocker

sue crocker

durham England
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