All At Once... Comments

GING, i know i read this not long ago. where is my comment? lost in PH space? or did i just forget to comment? or? ? anyway, i enjoyed reading it again. a fall from glory into the gutter. too bad! ! ! well done, Ging. Smile painted on your face.........yes. probably in more ways than one! i liked that you gave me some good rhymes, particularly at the end. the story moved along at a rapid pace, but gave enough information to understand thoroughly! thanks for sharing. bri :) P.S. I HEAR YOU ARE NOT WELL. BEST WISHES TO YOU!

nice touch of prose, flows well