All Around Us. Comments

What a lovely positive write! Your bright spirit is present in every line of your lyric poems. Shine on, Fay. Love, SandraX

Such a beautiful image of transition and those impatient flowers and leaves that peeped too early. It reminds me of a beautiful children's story book called The Little Old Lady in the Strawberry Patch. It was her job to paint the strawberries each year and of course, as happened in your poem, her timing was out and the snow came and her strawberries disappeared... I particularly liked your line '...first oiling /Tiny buds in cradled branch.' A lyrical poem. Love Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

A lovely poem Fay, I do enjoy reading poems about the spring. Best wishes, Andrew

Nature starts again and summer will soon be here...lovely piece Fay....

Natures life cycle begins again and theeye reaps thebenefits thankyou for sharing this Fay 10 +++ Chris

Beautiful evocation of the coming of Spring and the renewal of everything. Possibly, my favourite time of the year - and you have captured it perfectly.