Thursday, September 18, 2008

All Around Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Innocence in his eyes
A prayer at his lips
With so many questions unanswered
With so many things unknown
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Gauri Gupta
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Yaseen Anwer 09 October 2008

Deserve 10 on 10 proper construction beautiful theme keep going....

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Nia Riz 01 October 2008

how do you write these beautiful verses? ? ? it captures my mind a prisoner and is not letting go....one of my favorite poems after 'sleep my child'

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 September 2008

A moving poem, nicely composed, love it.

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