Friday, April 3, 2009

All Around Comments

Rating: 4.7

where ever she goes
all around hatred grows
'you're so annoying'!
they'd cry as her tears are pouring
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arianna loshnowsky
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Riyam 03 October 2019

That’s a great peom. I really love it

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Tyler Lee 06 August 2009

This poem is outstanding arianna. We need to talk whenever lol. talk to ya soon, And again. Its Good, it has a meaning to me, i feel the emotion in the girls sorrows.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 July 2009

very beautiful n does it reasons true, wonderful rhyming, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Meagan Slack 04 May 2009

haha me again.. you have such a way with words its amazing.. keep posting i love your poems

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Christina Smith 03 April 2009

i like the way you rhyme your words I would say nice poem but the fact that a girl is getting bullied is not nice, but i guess this will happen so...... well done arianna i felt your emotion in that piece of text! ! !

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